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[D4ilytoon # 369]

My Review of Your Movie

I demand monetary compensation for using my dancing T-Rex .gif even though you probably won't believe me that I made it but I assure you yes I did make it.

Review: This is a flash movie.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

why does it have a pussy

[Groundhog Day]

WELLL ACTUALLY

When he sees his shadow that means it's 6 more weeks of winter, you had it backwards. Know your groundhogs... But anyway nice going I fucking love you man. I just love the hell out of your skills and your style, baby. Nice to see you keeping it real. I love you baby. I just love you.

[Meat Grinder]

THOSE LAST THREE COLUMNS AREN'T WORTH MY TIME OF D

Let me tell you Zekey that was fucking amazing, baby. You've really got a lot up your sleeve, don't you sweetheart? You're a keeper, a real keeper, I can tell. I mean this with every string of my big brown heart, bubblegum, you've got what it takes to be the champ. J+ all the way. (That's A+ in spanish because they have H's for J's and A's for H's (Anyone with an IQ bigger than like 0 or nothing would know that but just in case you didn't))

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

I dont know what you said but it was 10 kinds of awesome.

[The Karnage Incident]

munch munch Yanno' munch

Making it a music video really killed it for me mMUNCH MUNCH MUNCH

[~Cookies~]

heeeellllooooooooooooooooooooooooo

This is way better than what I'd expect from someone's first flash cartoon. The joke was kinda dumb, could have been executed (no pun intended) better, I mean it was almost pretty funny but not quite there. But I like the idea.

What I like most is the look of it. It looks like you've been drawing in flash with a tablet for at least a little while. It has that inky look with odd variations in line thickness, and I like it. I think if you developed it more it could be pretty darn cool.

And it definitely shows you put time into it. The fluid parts of the animation were a refreshing surprise, like a cool mountain breeze rolling over a desert. It seems like you made the all too common mistake of relying on a shoddy music choice to carry it along. I would have liked to see it with more sound design. But again, most of the cartoons on here do that, I'm kind of nitpicking.

I'd hate to sound condescending, but you've got potential, kid.

Please excuse me but I don't know how old you are. You're a nice guy. :)

deadspread83 responds:

Thank you for the critique...always appreciated:)

[Jerries Actoin Thiler]

Prety Good flash Crtoon.

You shuld probably work on your flash abilateis as an flash artist How ever these flashs is the best improvment uv made so far

grpahics - 7: - I gave you 7 youyour drawng stiles and abilates are notthe best i have seen :\ i hav seen a lot tho so maybe i amjust too picky!There also not the be worset iv scene. try maibe usng some (tuts) turtorials

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style -5: you know you are wactching a jerri movie becuase it hascertain qwalites

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voilence: - 0 ther wasnt much of a volience in this thismovie excetp for some of the karate movs i saw in ther whihc were quite good quite an inprovmet from ur flash abiluties

interactivity - 0 ther is none of course itis a movie not a game!! ^_^

Humor ; -This series is gettn old! Um imean ive alredy seen a jerrie jasckons movie on the front page why don t you
Overall : still one of my favs i gave it a 10

~Reveiwed By THEDINNER_MAN_1997-Sonic Fans . com

[Vote 5 for MARIO!]

god dammit fucking THANK you

just

dammit.

i know

[Old vs New]

hello flash author

this is my favorite submission. I would like to pay you to feature it on the fuck society . com with your permission please

RyuXKen responds:

I'm very happy that you like my flash video. ill message you and we can talk about the featuring ^_^

[TANKMEN]

well that was god damn fantastic

I can't believe the boat was completely computer generized... were they even in the ocean?

[Mario Brothers - Part V]

Lighten up

This cartoon, and this series, is entirely too melodramatic for a flash cartoon where all the artwork and premise is ripped out of Super Mario Bros. I think you'd probably have some cinematic talent and be able to provoke some legitimate emotional response with something that isn't a sprite cartoon. But then, I'm a guy who thinks sprite cartoons are an enormous waste of everyone's time and a disgustingly pathetic excuse for artistry LAMAO LOL rofl. They're cute in small doses, but this is just way way overboard. This would be overly melodramatic even if it wasn't a sprite cartoon. It might work if it took itself less seriously and/or the presentation was different... but given the means of (assumingly) young flash animators on their home computers, I guess that's excuseable. Overall, for what it was, the cinematic quality of it was impressive, but I just can't enjoy it in its own respect, it doesn't stand on its own two feet. Though I may be missing what you're going for. To risk sounding condescending (as if I haven't enough already) I think you'd have a great deal of potential working with other artists, and maybe refining your scripts and plotlines. You've got a clear knack for scene composition, but it seems like you kinda go off the rails with the epic drama. Like I said, with different means, maybe, but it just seemed silly. the NG dweebs seem to like it though. toOdles <3